Review 1 I did not like this not one bit they only part I really like was the first page telling what us what's was a wifey was but as I got reading it boom I getting mad cause it was all about sex then here is the confusing part all this future and past shit come on now this was all over the place the story didn't not add up,to me like for this what happen to Mal mom and what up with this flip flop in this story I thought she was playing his wife so they can hide the fact he was into something else then turn around saying that his family knew she like women or something let talk about jalisa ok when the part when she got hurt by mark and the girl was trying to get her to call her parents but she didn't want too cause they might make come back home but down the line when something pop off about alanzo needed one more favor he wanted his bro killed and and jalisa mom as well okay now here the flip flop shit again now her mom suppose to be dead that what jalisa think any way but turn out her mom is a sex slave and her man is fucking her off of that now it started off when Mal was at the club on her bday with her girls and when she. Met dom now my question is close too the end u came back with Dom in the picture but Mal and dom already been together for 2 years then married okay this is my problem why u didn't go too detailed u know about how they got where at first date FRIST love making all that u did not give a history on that relationship then in the beginning so was saying I love this woman I did her so wrong but she stuck with through it all now my question what all the shit u did to her put it like this I didn't like the story it could be something but it was all over the place and too many flip flop but sorry back to drawing board oh what's up with the killing shit it was only two kills but didn't go for play for play on how that went down meaning the killing not getting ready and setting up the kill I want too here about it suppose to a part two let say I will see if it got better
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